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Friday 10 March 2017

Port Hills Fire

                 Port Hills Fire

The fire on the Port Hills were once two fires that merged together and made one huge and massive fire. That made a lot of fire fighters evacuate people that live on the Port Hills .

People living near certain roads got evacuated when the fire was burning on the Port Hills because it came very close to them.

Eleven houses and two sheds got burnt by the orange and yellow flames of the Port Hills fire.

It was horrifying for the people who owned the house to get out of their house and then turn around to watch it get burn down into ash. If I lived on the Port Hills when the fire was on I would be absolutely  horrified and terrified. If I saw my house get burnt down by the fire and also burn into ash.

People that live on the Port Hills are thankful that the  firefighters put out the humongous fire and saved their homes from getting burnt down and the fire has brought  frustration to Christchurch and also Christchurch thinks the firefighters are really brave because they battled  the furious fire. By:Shyla


 














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16 comments:

  1. Chloe Johnstone22 March 2017 at 09:35

    Great story Shyla. I love the way that you have separated it into paragraphs. You have really showed your knowledge of the fire on the port hills, well done. Next time think about the colours you are using, as I found the yellow quite hard to read!

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  2. Anonymous22 March 2017 at 09:35

    I Love your work it is so impresive.

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  3. Anonymous22 March 2017 at 09:38

    that is very cool shyla. I also like your picture too. were did you go online to get that picture. because I haven't seen that one online.
    from kevin.

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    1. Anonymous22 March 2017 at 09:51

      I found it on explore it said you wrote about this and the picture showed up

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  4. Anonymous22 March 2017 at 09:40

    amazing you have done really well I am Impressed and nice work you have done a nice job I love your work.

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  5. Anonymous22 March 2017 at 09:43

    good fire story you are a good writer i like it you need more full stops

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  6. Anonymous22 March 2017 at 09:50

    Good fire story you are a good writer i like it you need more full stops.

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  7. Anonymous22 March 2017 at 09:57

    your story is fantastic work good job shyla your four work is nice.

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  8. Anonymous22 March 2017 at 10:03

    I like the part when you wrote three chapters of the fire

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  9. Anonymous23 March 2017 at 14:24

    great job but you need more fullstops

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  10. Anonymous23 March 2017 at 14:25

    Hi shyla it's shikarn here this a awesome post.

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  11. Anonymous23 March 2017 at 14:31

    HI SHYLA THIS IS JILL I LIKE THAT THINGY YOU WROTE ABOUT PORT HILLS AND THE FIRE. THAT FIRE MUST BE SCARY!

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  12. Anonymous23 March 2017 at 14:35

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  13. Anonymous23 March 2017 at 14:36

    Hi Shyla, Mikayla K I love your work it's so awesome and I really like how separated all the parts from each other but I found the yellow words a bit hard to read but it was amazing good job.

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  14. Anonymous24 March 2017 at 10:21

    Namaste Shyla
    Chloe here just looking at your blog.I can't believe my eye's this is excellent work great job i'm so impressed bye all the descriptive words this is awesome keep it up.Maybe next time do addif you know how it started.One question.How did you come up with all the descriptive fluency words.Bye see you later.

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  15. Anonymous24 March 2017 at 10:51

    Hi shyla its Camryn I red the writing that you writ it was good the potato was really good it shows that you read about it and don a story.

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