I was a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This was a place where I shared my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts.
I like the way you didn't do the some wallpaper.Did you think about adding stars because it's Matariki.Next time you coulld go back and check your writing?
Hi Shyla, The interesting part was when you explained what the 7 sisters and the 2 brothers responsibilities are. This reminded me of when I made a Matariki slide in literacy time. To improve, you could make the title slide a background of Matariki (or The Pleiades) and make it the title slide background.
Hey Shyla. i like the part when you put the names of the nine Stars they are really good because they shine up in the sky so then they can show you were to go. i remember when i did a matariki slide and mine was kinder like your one.maybe toy could put a matakik background!! blog you later!!
Hi shyla it's me Addison good work on the Matariki slide and it looks like you have done lost if hard work on it but maybe you can try to put the words a bit bigere bye got to do more work.
Kia ora Shyla, I like what you have done here, that you told everyone the names, then how you told them their meanings, and I especially like how you collabed with Riley. Blog you later!
hi shyla its Acasia from Gilberthorpe school. good job I liked the way you for the last slide u put you guys thank you note: and i relly liked what you said. I also like this blogpost because this part gave me a shook and it made me happy to see nice things next time you could add a slide and on that slide you could put a small video.
I like the way you didn't do the some wallpaper.Did you think about adding stars because it's Matariki.Next time you coulld go back and check your writing?
ReplyDeleteHi Shyla,
ReplyDeleteThe interesting part was when you explained what the 7 sisters and the 2 brothers responsibilities are. This reminded me of when I made a Matariki slide in literacy time. To improve, you could make the title slide a background of Matariki (or The Pleiades) and make it the title slide background.
Hi,Shyla i like this but i know did it with you but it was still fun:D i don't know what to say cuz i did it you.well i have to go bye.
ReplyDeleteHey Shyla.
ReplyDeletei like the part when you put the names of the nine Stars they are really good because they shine up in the sky so then they can show you were to go. i remember when i did a matariki slide and mine was kinder like your one.maybe toy could put a matakik background!! blog you later!!
Hi shyla it's me Addison good work on the Matariki slide and it looks like you have done lost if hard work on it but maybe you can try to put the words a bit bigere bye got to do more work.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Shyla,
ReplyDeleteI like what you have done here, that you told everyone the names, then how you told them their meanings, and I especially like how you collabed with Riley.
Blog you later!
Hey Shyla good work on this. How long did it take you to make this? I like how you put the star names on.
ReplyDeletehi shyla its Acasia from Gilberthorpe school. good job I liked the way you for the last slide u put you guys thank you note: and i relly liked what you said. I also like this blogpost because this part gave me a shook and it made me happy to see nice things next time you could add a slide and on that slide you could put a small video.
ReplyDeletehay its levi i like it it is a good pes of work
ReplyDeletekia ora Shyla i really like your slide. I like how you worked with a buddy. I like the slide when you and Riley named all the Matariki stars.
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